No Diving In Spanish

By admin, October 8, 2009 10:59 pm

no diving in spanish
Poem translation from English to Spanish?

Can native Spanish Speakers please translate the below from English into Spanish for me ?

Please do not use an online translator – since it will not work.

Thank you very much.
A.

Being swept off my feet, by the waves of your look,
Drowning slowly in the depth of your eyes,
Seeing the danger in diving into your soul.

Naturally comfortable shedding cloth and armour
Vulnerable, yet stronger than ever,
Inviting the water to caress my skin, while my
Image is mirrored in your ocean of love.

Knowingly taking one last breath of air,
Before heading for our quiet, our peaceful kingdom,
To which no one else has a key.
A refuge amidst all noise and watching hawks.

Embracing the sea closing in over my head,
While happily sinking into the windows of your soul.

Here´s my interpretation, I made some changes cause the nature of this text, being a poem, needed these words to sound better.

Al ser barrido desde mis pies por las olas de tu mirada,
Ahogandome lentamente en la profundidad de tus ojos,
Viendo el peligro de sumergirme dentro de tu alma.

Naturalmente comodo despojandome de mi ropa y armadura,
Vulnerable pero aún mas fuerte que nunca,
Invitando al agua, a acariciar mi piel, mientras mi
imagen se refleja en el mar de tu amor.

Tomando a sabiendas una ultima bocanada de aire,
Antes de dirigirnos hacia nuestro tranquilo y pacifico reino,
Del que nadie mas tiene la llave,
Un refugio en medio de todo el ruido y los halcones vigias.

Abriendo los brazos al mar que me cubre hasta la cabeza,
Mientras felizmente me sumerjo a traves de las ventanas de tu alma.

The Spanish Arch, Scuba Diving at White Island


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